The things I really like about makeup is the way the colors make your eyes pop. I'm more of a natural color type of person I don't like those bright colors all up on your eye.
This type of make up doesn't make your eye pop this makes you look like a clown. The color is to dramatic for her it doesn't make eyes pop out. The thing that I would change I would just put it on the eyelid softly and not pull it all the way to the eyebrow. That is way too much.
This is how the eye make up should look like. Not to dark or dramatic, more of a natural look. Theses color are more soft. They actually make her eye pop.
I love the cover up when its done right and you don't look orange and or darker then your neck. This for example is very off her natural skin color.
This is what the cover up should look like the same color as your natural skin color or close to the same color. Also brought down to your neck so it evens everything out.